In todays class we had a group critique, this was a good chance to give each other advice and feedback on our web design essays.
We added are links to the Miro page Kyle sent us:
This is my page before I made any changes. I will finish my website and show the final outcome in my mai nDesign Web Essay project.
As I didn’t have my web design fully finished on time for critique due to illness I listened to the advice that Kyle and my other peers gave me. I found it useful to listen to the feedback from other classmates web designs and add in changes to my design for instance separating each section into different colours to make it feel more playful. I have learnt to not leave everything to the last minute and I will be improving that in the next semester.